Finally, the door opened and there it was, the brobdingnagian Pink Star Diamond. The light from the window above shone through the prism, creating a kaleidoscope of colours within the room. Frank knew he had to take it, but he surely would be caught as the diamond was very sparkly and bright pink which would definitely not blend in to any of the surrounding area. Sadly, there was no fire exit and the only other way out was the window above. Of course he had no rope, but luckily he was wearing his long socks. He tied his socks together to make a stinky rope. Frank tied the rope, grabbed the diamond and fled the building. When Frank got home he immediately went on E-bay to sell the stolen diamond. Frank got many offers but to his surprise they all came from the police.
Great story I really enjoyed reading each line to see if he would be caught. Great word choice in kaledioscope. I am not sure about the word "brobdingnagian" as it doesn't seem to help with your fluency of your story. Keep writing and make sure you submit them on time.
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